As womag writers will know, stories are sold to TPF under a ‘shared rights’ agreement. Once they’ve bought the stories, they can republish them, and so can the author. I’d always hoped that one day I might have written enough convict constable stories to be able to publish them in book form. I was midway through writing another Will Grafton long crime read for TPF when DC Thomson briefly republished the three convict constable stories in ebook format in 2024.
This move galvanised me into finally doing something about that book of convict constable stories. In my files, I had a convict constable story that TPF had rejected as being a tad dark for their readership. I had the story I was halfway through writing. I had ideas for a couple more stories. And, of course, I still had shared rights to the three published ones.
While self-publishing was an option, I decided to try traditional publishing first. I had a good track record as a writer of short crime fiction. I’d won the Scarlet Stiletto Award (a prestigious short crime story award in Australia), been runner-up three times, and had taken out category prizes like Mystery with History. And I’d had ‘solve it yourself’ mysteries published in Woman’s World in the USA in addition to the dozens of cosy crime stories and the three mystery serials I’d had published in TPF. Plus one of my convict constable stories – which TPF had titled ‘Dead Men Tell No Tales’ – had been a finalist for the Derringer Awards, run by the Short Mystery Fiction Society in the US, in 2023.
To my surprise, she contacted me almost immediately. Unknown to me, Clan Destine Press had recently started a new imprint for short crime stories called ‘Crime Waves’; the first two collections had just come back from the printer. She was interested in considering my collection for this imprint. We ended the call, with me agreeing to submit a 70,000-word seven-story collection for consideration in early 2025.
Over the Australian summer of 2024-25, I finished the story I was halfway through and wrote two new ones. I also needed to make some changes to the already written stories, mostly to get rid of any repetition. The three stories TPF had published contained necessary repetition to introduce Will and various recurring characters to readers who mightn’t have read the previous stories. The story TPF had rejected contained similar ‘introductions’ to characters. But in a collection of short stories, which would be read one after the other, that repetition wasn’t necessary. I finally submitted the book in April 2025 and was delighted when it was accepted in January this year.
I thought I’d captured all the repetition until I received my edits! While I’d carefully removed those sentences and paragraphs that introduced characters, other little bits had slipped past me. Like mentioning that Hobart Town’s water storage tower was in Macquarie Street every time a convict maid headed there with her buckets. Or that Elizabeth Street was part of Hobart Town’s commercial area every time Will needed to interview a shopkeeper. More cutting!
The editor had pinpointed another continuity issue as well. The three TPF stories took place in March, June and September/October 1838. During that time, Will’s relationship with a convict maid, Norah Cottman, developed from first meeting, to friendship, then to romance. But because of the time jumps, the reader didn’t actually see the relationship develop. Those time jumps allowed for natural growth. Not so with the short story collection, which now had Will solving crimes in March, April, June, July, September/October, and November 1838 and in February 1839. Their relationship needed to develop on the page. This was the most challenging part of the editing process for me, turning romantic elements into a romance that needed to ring true to the reader, but didn’t detract from the crime-solving.
Sentenced Beyond the Seas: The Convict Constable’s Casebook will be published later this year. I’m excited to see Will in book form, and hope people who read the original TPF stories will enjoy reading his other cases, and that he’ll reach a bunch of new readers too.




Hi Liz. Congratulations and what an interesting journey you’re having. Thanks for sharing. I’d never really thought about the continuity issues or the necessary changes if publishing short stories as a collection. And what perfect timing for you to contact Lindy! I’ve really enjoyed your convict constable stories in PF so am sure the book will be a winner.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Liz. What a fantastic insight into all the issues as you've come across them. Not that I've written a book at all, but I do think about continuity, and then I find it all so daunting I just wonder where you start! I admire that skill to go through the mental checklist, real or virtual biographies and timelines, whether assisted by software or not, and pull it off, so, congratulations, Liz and I hope it's a success. I'm just wondering how many times you've had to read those stories...🤔. I know how many times I read my short stories before I press 'submit'!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Liz. A fabulous story of success. Very inspiring!
ReplyDeleteIt's still very quiet for me but the next FF will be a summer special with extra stories in. We're wondering if these will be re- prints.
The TPF summer bookazine should be out soon, too.
Congratulations, Liz. It's fascinating to read about the whole journey to your book and what an interesting project for you.
ReplyDeleteI know what you mean about reading stories before submitting, Marguerite, I'm exactly the same - I sometimes have to force myself to click that button. I'm always thinking, "oh, just one more check"!
Congratulations Liz, wishing you success with your book, it sounds a fascinating period of history. How interesting to read about the continuity and repetition pitfalls, and how you dealt with them.
ReplyDeleteI agree, Marian and Marguerite, re double checking before pressing ‘send’! I even double check the story when it is an attachment just in case I have somehow attached multiple stories … 😊
Dee
So interesting, Liz. I'm glad you were able to put the constable stories together. I would never have thought of those continuity issues with a book. Hope the book does well now. Maybe another blog on marketing at some point?
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Really interesting to learn about the journey of these stories and their author. Thanks for sharing, Liz, and I hope the book flies for you. You have accomplished a great deal in a short time, in your creative writing career, and you can be rightly proud of your achievements.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Liz . Congratulations on the book. So interesting to read how it all came together. A huge achievement. I hope you get the cherry-on-top sales.
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Liz that's really interesting, thanks for sharing, never would have considered all the extra editing work required to convert connected short stories into a book. Well done in getting there, I look forward to reading it when its available.
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone, for your lovely comments. I really hope readers enjoy the book down the track, regardless of whether they've met Will before or not.
ReplyDelete@Eirin - thanks for saying that. I tend to berate myself for not writing more in previous decades. But I really have written a lot since 2019, and, more importantly, enjoyed all the writing.
@Marguerite and others re. reading the stories over and over - I've lost count of how many times I've read them, especially the three that TPF published. I think over-familiarity with the individual stories meant I didn't notice some of the continuity issues across them.
ReplyDeleteI have a delay in sending email, 10 seconds, I think. (I have set that). The number of times I've pressed submit... and then rescinded! But you are right, you end up overlooking things just because! I'm looking forward to reading this when it comes out.
DeleteCongratulations Liz. That's great news. ( I recently discovered a distant relation who was transported ages in his early 20s to Tassie! He did rather well and eventually his parents and sister joined him.)
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Liz and thank you for sharing the journey to publication of your book. I hope it flies and that there will be more to follow.
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting blog. Thank you, Liz, for sharing your journey and process. I am really looking forward to getting the book!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this story about your journey. Congratulations on the book.
ReplyDelete“Think before you speak. Read before you think.” — Fran Lebowitz
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Thanks for the new comments!
ReplyDelete@Lindsay - quite a few convicts ended up doing well here. But it must have been terrifying when they were sent out. Did your distant relation stay in Tassie or did he eventually move to another state?