Tuesday, 18 March 2025

Tuesday top tip(s) - writing a series

Here are a few things I learned from writing my Little Mallow cosy mystery series. I thought they might be of interest to authors contemplating writing their first series.


(btw, book 1 in the series is currently free to download.)

1. When planning your release schedule, allow lots of time. Although it is true that books in a series are quicker to write than standalones (because you don't have quite so much world building and character creation to do) the process isn't a lot faster. Readers won't want to wait too long to read the next one, but it's far better to set a realistic timetable than an overly optimistic one you don't meet.



2. Keep notes, a database, or spreadsheet of nearly everything! It might seem tedious to record the name of every single character, their partners, jobs etc, but having those details recorded in an easy to check format will save time and/or help avoid silly errors.


3. Depending on the genre, it might be a good idea to create a timeline chart of some kind. With my latest book I needed a very precise one to be sure people's alibis did, or didn't, work properly. A more general overall one can be useful for keeping track of things such as how long characters have known each other, making sure everyone just has the one birthday a year, that you don't have fourteen month pregnancies, and that everyone ages accurately in relation to everyone else.


4. Keep any planning notes after completing earlier books in the series. These will make it easier to check what's already happened than if you need to read through the entire novel.


5. As much as possible, plan the entire series in advance. That can help you avoid backing yourself into a corner by writing something you later regret e.g. killing off a character before you've finished with them, or failing to mention something which later becomes important to the storyline. For example, in my second book the fact the verger doesn't drive is important. As it's unusual for capable, employed men in their thirties, not to drive, this information is mentioned in the first book. I also mention a skill he does posses which proves useful later on.


6. If a character will become important for a later book in the series, consider including them as a minor character in earlier books. That way readers (and you) will get to know them and care more about what happens when they become more involved.


7. Decide whether each book will work as a standalone as well as part of the series, or if the books need to be read in order for the storylines to work. If it's the latter, make that clear in the descriptions, blurb and any promotions.


8. Although you'll want some kind of resolution at the end of each book, don't feel you must completely tie off every single lose end. That can feel contrived. 


9. When publishing, consider putting you books into kindle unlimited, as series are popular with KU readers. This does require you to make the books exclusive with Amazon, which doesn't suit everyone, but you can opt out again after three months and make your books 'wide' then.



10. Consider making the first book in the series a little cheaper than the others. That's both to encourage potential readers to give it a try, and to steer them towards starting at the beginning and hopefully reading all the way through.


11. Consider creating some kind of free bonus material to promote the series. In my case I wrote a short ebook, set in the village of Little Mallow. This is available exclusively to those who sign up for my newsletter. It gives an insight into the location for the series and introduction to some characters.


12. Writing a series is a big commitment – be sure you're happy to spend time with your characters and in your fictitious world! Personally I love spending time in Little Mallow, and am very fond of the residents. I'm delighted to hear that many of my readers feel the same way.

This tip was brought to you by Patsy Collins. If you'd like to contribute your own tip to this blog, here's what to do.



8 comments:

Ruth said...

Oh, I loved this post. Really practical, and useful - but also funny. (14 month pregnancies!) Regarding timelines, I once wrote a story where the planting of seeds and the blooming of flowers played a huge part - but I got the seasons/timing all wrong, and was told by a keen gardener that it just didn't make sense.
I struggle enough writing 1200 words sometimes, so not sure I have a series in me, but who knows!
Thanks, Patsy.

Eirin said...

Strongly agree with Ruth - this is a fantastic, practical post, with lots of useful advice gained first-hand. I would suggest that much of it applies if you are considering trying to write magazine fiction featuring recurring characters, too. Thanks, Patsy!

Sheelagh said...

Thanks Patsy for so generously sharing all of this, lots of food for thought if I should ever manage to write a book, I'd love to but I don't know if I could not to mention a series. It's really great to get some inside info re the possible pitfalls before trying. I know it's a bit of a let down to invest time in reading something that has very obvious gaffes in it - it tends to crash land you back to reality!

Marguerite said...

I agree! Brilliant advice, and, as Eirin says, if you have short stories with recurring characters. I find myself picking up on continuity watching television: how many Christmases were there in the 'Heartbeat' decade?😉 I think I'd be alright on the blooming flowers and generally seasons, but yes, keep tabs on the whole timeline. An aside, I am deep in Little Mallow at present, and I still don't know who dunnit!

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Planning ahead is definitely helpful. (I didn't but it somehow worked.) And certainly don't wait long between releases.

Elizabeth said...

Thanks Patsy, very useful advice indeed! I'm pleased to say the hard work you've put in is apparent as the series is a joy to read.

Anonymous said...

Thanks, Patsy. A helpful set of tips and advice.
I like the idea of a spreadsheet to keep track of everything.
HB

Marian said...

Many thanks, Patsy. This was fascinating. I haven’t considered writing a series, although I am now trying one longer project, but I still found your tips really interesting and helpful to have in the back of my mind.